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This was the first page i painted, hence the problems. You find them. This story is the girl is at the bus stop and it starts to rain and she is the only one with an umbrella, nonetheless one big enough for everybody. You guessed it, this is where she gives up the umbrella for the people. If this story looks good or if you like the art, let me know. I might make the whole book in this style. Also let me know what you don't like and I try fixing it.